“Elusive Dreams” is copied from my book “Just Thinking” (link via book cover over in right column). All the poems in the book are very easy to understand. Some may provoke thoughts about life in general, or perhaps about your own life experiences, but none will leave you wondering “What on earth was that about?”!
If you are interested in a book which can be picked up as time permits, and put down a few minutes later, then consider “Just Thinking” – A little book, for when you have a little time, with some little writings, which may produce some little thoughts. A great gift for that special friend, or to casually position on your coffee table to arouse interest in guests while you are busy elsewhere!
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Now … imagine yourself at home, on your own, on a cold winter’s night. You are curled up in your favorite chair reading a book; have a hot drink on the table beside you, and a wood fire crackling in front of you. You are totally absorbed in your book when suddenly, your focus is interrupted by a muffled knock on your front door. You get up and, wondering who would be visiting at this time of night, go to the door and open it.
I was so surprised to see you
Standing at my door.
No smile upon your face,
Just… “Hello”,
And nothing more.
You sat down by the fire
And I sensed a need to talk,
So… don’t go to sleep on me now.
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You talked of days gone by,
Of dreams, of friends and of change;
Of our adventures long ago,
And of our walking in the rain.
Your eyes then clouded over,
As you stumbled through your thoughts.
Don’t go to sleep on me now.
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Don’t go to sleep on me now.
You’ve clearly so much more to say.
I know you’re very tired
But… believe me when I say that
I’ll be with you all the way…
And until you smile again.
Just… don’t go to sleep on me now.
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I watched you quite intently
As you tried to find the words,
Expressing anger, pain and loss,
Disappointments and fears.
I watched the tears run down your cheeks,
And I watched your eyelids close.
Don’t go to sleep on me now.
***
Dawn is fast approaching.
I know that soon you must leave
To go on with your journey,
And to chase your elusive dreams.
My heart will always be with you,
Wherever you may go.
So rest… go to sleep on me now.
Go to sleep on me now.
Colin, that is so wonderful. How may I get a copy of that book here in the good old US of A? Are you on Amazon?
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Hi Paul. Link below goes to amazon.com however, the book is also available from all the other usual on-line book retailers, and it is in hard-cover, paper-back, and eBook formats.
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Thank you. I will buy one pdq!
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Thank you Paul. I thank that you will enjoy it. 🙂
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This may be a better link!
https://books.friesenpress.com/store/title/119734000032944229/Colin-Chappell-Just-Thinking
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Now ordered!!
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Thank you Paul. If you find it interesting/thought provoking, I hope that you will consider giving it a formal review at wherever you ordered it. Reviews, as you are no doubt aware, are so important for marketing purposes … and more so for poetry, being such a “niche” market area. 🙂
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Colin, as night follows day!! Will probably publish my review on Learning from Dogs and then you can make whatever use of it that you want. (Of course, there is a degree of assumption that I will love your poetry – only a very tiny degree!!)
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Hey ……… I would not expect you to be anything other than totally honest! 🙂
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Such an intense image. Universal as everyone can identify with it in one way or another.
Love the grace given to leave at the end.
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🙂
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So glad that you could relate to it. Thanks for letting me know.
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Wonderful poem Colin. Comforting and sweet. Dogs are the best that way. Cheers.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Actually, I’m not 100% sure of what I read. (It’s nothing bad. Actually, I like the fact that it evokes different scenarios in my head.) Was it a long lost love? Or was it an estranged family member? Was it really about sleeping, or about someone dying?
I think you don’t give yourself enough credit, when it comes to your poetry.
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My challenge was writing poetry, all the time knowing that I have never particularly liked poetry. I read other peoples writings (e.g. Blogs) because I want to learn about them; read their successes and challenges; read their frustrations; read their aspirations etc.. Reading poetry however, usually left me with the thought “What was that about?” “Why can’t I make any sense of it?” My own poetic offerings were therefore driven by balancing clarity of message with sufficient latitude to stimulate related thoughts in the reader. Many thanks for taking the time to express yourself here. 🙂
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You left me hanging by not telling me exactly what your piece was about.
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I thought the possibilities your suggested were very good. You could just pick one of them? 🙂
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I guess I’ll have to.
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Not really. That piece was written as a consolidation of a few circumstances. Primarily it was based on an experience I had while working as a volunteer at the Crisis Intervention Unit in a major Toronto hospital. It was then “colored” by memories of a friend’s attempted suicide, and then a dear friend of mine moved away. No guessing necessary! 🙂
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So it was like a combination of my thoughts. Cool. Thanks for that.
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You’re welcome. You did very well with your understanding of it! 🙂
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This poem grabs my heart. It is full of strong emotions, and does make it so easy to picture in your mind. Well done my friend!
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Thank you. 🙂
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This is so deep and tender, Colin.
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Thank you Chris. Your reaction alone made it worthwhile including in the book. 🙂
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